tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8654887465201994138.post4738084267751359302..comments2024-03-02T09:05:39.993-06:00Comments on Korinthia's Quiet Corner: Looking for opinions on part of my first novelKorinthiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15580286551375780490noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8654887465201994138.post-11045688998413645742012-08-02T14:02:07.812-05:002012-08-02T14:02:07.812-05:00Thanks Peg! I'd love to have your book club...Thanks Peg! I'd love to have your book club's input. I plan to have a friend of mine (Ms Irretrievably Broken as a matter of fact) help me polish the final draft and then I may investigate offering it up on Kindle. (In which case I should probably get a Kindle.)Korinthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15580286551375780490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8654887465201994138.post-44321773771893168252012-08-02T13:55:25.351-05:002012-08-02T13:55:25.351-05:00The Pink Ponies from the painting. Something you ...The Pink Ponies from the painting. Something you search for that's elusive and beautiful, but is really of your own creation, your own reality. Life is what you choose to make of it, and you can choose to look for the pink ponies or not. That's kind of the lesson Maddie learns in the end. I still kind of like The Real Mom as a title, but a few of the agents who gave me any feedback said the title would have to change, so I've been playing with other ideas.Korinthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15580286551375780490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8654887465201994138.post-160988454340749042012-08-02T10:06:13.961-05:002012-08-02T10:06:13.961-05:00Kory-- it's great that you are having others c...Kory-- it's great that you are having others critique your work. Extremely important. I particularly like this section of the story and was happy to read it again. Pink Ponies? Doesn't sound right to me...barretthttp://www.pupating.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8654887465201994138.post-81084453455255681362012-08-01T21:32:16.097-05:002012-08-01T21:32:16.097-05:00Korinthia-
this is good, really good and hooked me...Korinthia-<br />this is good, really good and hooked me for very personal reasons from the beginning. Ironically, Emma dressed up as wonder woman for a recent swim meet and it was her aunt peg who made the costume. The opening thoughts of wanting to tell her mom about her babies is something I think about a lot...all the things the girls and Jeanne will miss. I'd love to read more...would you consider letting my book club read a preview and give you vonstructive feedback. As a group of moms and avid readers I think we' d have a lot to offer. We could even skype you in. Anyway, just a thought. Oh and I dont think you need to add Brave to it..I love the incredibles reference too.Peghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02162890081910497200noreply@blogger.com